tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post1448435365841471525..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: Indie Ink Writing Challenge: Did You Mean It?8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-9506314212594777452012-01-17T22:18:46.731-05:002012-01-17T22:18:46.731-05:00I'm honored by your praise.
@Marian- I'm ...I'm honored by your praise.<br /><br />@Marian- I'm thrilled.8https://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-51363630213220507392012-01-17T11:27:33.397-05:002012-01-17T11:27:33.397-05:00i loved this story so much that i used your prompt...i loved this story so much that i used your prompt to write another chapter. hope that is not too terribly annoying. heh.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-12650604577346099712012-01-17T00:38:26.429-05:002012-01-17T00:38:26.429-05:00Eerily authentic. Like you peeked into my own worl...Eerily authentic. Like you peeked into my own world of kids and cats and fuzzy pj's. I felt like I could slip into this world.<br /><br />You have a gift for writing scenes that play out as if they are reality, they come to life and leap off the page.<br /><br />I would have loved to have been given a glimpse, just a tiny glimmer, if what he believes is going on in his wife's mind is Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-23390650805066526382012-01-16T21:54:50.223-05:002012-01-16T21:54:50.223-05:00This is really beautifully done. I love the way y...This is really beautifully done. I love the way your intermingle his thoughts about his wife with what's going on in the game. Very real portrait of a very real relationship.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-7091531352179893682012-01-16T21:51:39.261-05:002012-01-16T21:51:39.261-05:00yeah, the nuances are what makes this terrific. Yo...yeah, the nuances are what makes this terrific. Your dialogue is really well done. I always come here to up my game.<br /><br />Good jobLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-52971370437638588692012-01-16T15:33:05.522-05:002012-01-16T15:33:05.522-05:00A brutally honest look at this couple. Very real e...A brutally honest look at this couple. Very real emotions and interaction between them.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-78392089242588427032012-01-16T12:17:52.118-05:002012-01-16T12:17:52.118-05:00Our glimpse into their life is so real--from his d...Our glimpse into their life is so real--from his distraction watching the sports scores to her indifference after spending a night being phony. You did a great job of catching every little detail.Head Anthttp://headant.comnoreply@blogger.com