tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post2283699908246863533..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: Indie Ink Writing Challenge: "Strong Like Tungsten"8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-60472953268230110532012-04-08T12:49:56.219-04:002012-04-08T12:49:56.219-04:00Having been there, done that and seen how the affe...Having been there, done that and seen how the affects ripple out into EVERY aspect of your life, I salute you, sir. A really good insight into a man's response to what is typically only written about by women.WritingGoddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15681717536366619770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-45139495638923869132012-04-06T20:02:19.549-04:002012-04-06T20:02:19.549-04:00Having known couples that went through this, I thi...Having known couples that went through this, I think you touched a very painful nerve.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-65318338699470769852012-04-04T14:43:48.924-04:002012-04-04T14:43:48.924-04:00It began a little stilted, I think the first parag...It began a little stilted, I think the first paragraph could use some reworking. Too many sentences beginning with 'I' perhaps.<br /><br />But as the story began I fell into the tale of woe that is infertility and trouble conceiving. The slide into despair and anger was well done.Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-66694086217170408722012-04-04T13:33:21.956-04:002012-04-04T13:33:21.956-04:00Having lived through some of this, I am quite impr...Having lived through some of this, I am quite impressed that you explained the emotions so well. Nice job! "You couldn't be angry at anyone, because it wasn't anyone's fault." - that line made me laugh a little, though - I was angry at everyone for a while. It wasn't their fault, but they could do easily what we, it turned out, simply could not do. Anyway, thank you for Wendrynhttp://www.wendryn.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-65284462896495015752012-04-04T11:12:11.816-04:002012-04-04T11:12:11.816-04:00you are so talented. i raise a toast to you.you are so talented. i raise a toast to you.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.com