tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post3887423344695203148..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: It's Raining In Baltimore (Flash Fiction Friday Challenge)8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-90360405610593881312011-12-22T09:12:34.141-05:002011-12-22T09:12:34.141-05:00Escape is often not the exalting liberating experi...Escape is often not the exalting liberating experience it is painted out to be. Your story points that out nicely.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-40172773401255792272011-12-22T08:55:40.531-05:002011-12-22T08:55:40.531-05:00Actually, no.
The song is the Counting Crows'...Actually, no. <br /><br />The song is the Counting Crows' "Raining In Baltimore". The bonus lyric is from the musical Rent- "that's poetic/that's pathetic".8https://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-238939600574809752011-12-21T23:28:41.813-05:002011-12-21T23:28:41.813-05:00I agree with cmstewartwrite about "good day f...I agree with cmstewartwrite about "good day for murder". Although, maybe it is a red herring, because I was confused, thinking her husband had already been murdered. Nonetheless, it was riveting. The pacing, suspense and writing were good, clean, and crisp. I would like to read more of their story. Thanks for sharing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07721288431605045643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-84233962404213743652011-12-21T19:04:11.914-05:002011-12-21T19:04:11.914-05:00I like the interplay with the waitress- it adds di...I like the interplay with the waitress- it adds dimension.<br /><br />Without checking, my guess is "a good day for a murder."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-89376973116328498002011-12-21T15:26:08.221-05:002011-12-21T15:26:08.221-05:00Good one Michael, I like how the backstory slowly ...Good one Michael, I like how the backstory slowly plays out...Thomas Pluckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17008022962076648740noreply@blogger.com