tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post4060812904492151167..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: 0:02.5 (Indie Ink Writing Challenge)8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-52541431926442591242011-12-01T17:58:42.054-05:002011-12-01T17:58:42.054-05:00Very evocative language. Beautifully done.Very evocative language. Beautifully done.Cedarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06335404569894164715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-16998869314272407612011-11-30T15:15:32.429-05:002011-11-30T15:15:32.429-05:00Whoa. Very good stuff.Whoa. Very good stuff.Major Bedheadhttp://majorbedhead.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-53787742933158189592011-11-30T14:59:31.197-05:002011-11-30T14:59:31.197-05:00That was beautiful. Your descriptions were so vivi...That was beautiful. Your descriptions were so vivid I could hear the noise then the silence.Liz Culverhttp://lizculver.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-60266136991917100682011-11-30T14:41:22.296-05:002011-11-30T14:41:22.296-05:00Your descriptions take the reader down to the fiel...Your descriptions take the reader down to the field. Wonderful imagery.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-37987726283346238092011-11-30T11:21:00.473-05:002011-11-30T11:21:00.473-05:00I don't know if you ever played, with writing ...I don't know if you ever played, with writing like this, I assume so.<br /><br />In my football and baseball days, there was that moment when you were in your place of complete concentration. It was an epic quiet.<br /><br />well done<br /><br />Oh and Bobby V's your new managerLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com