tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post6996075359093084332..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: Indie Ink Writing Challenge: July 1, 18638http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-60073786568535440502011-09-05T12:12:28.859-04:002011-09-05T12:12:28.859-04:00Very well done. I like the line "He's a h...Very well done. I like the line "He's a human being, child." We would all do well to remember that these days.wendrynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06997119641497745602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-58567451990072094952011-09-04T23:27:41.214-04:002011-09-04T23:27:41.214-04:00LOVE this. I think it is my favorite. It is a diff...LOVE this. I think it is my favorite. It is a different perspective on the whole war idea and you did an amazing job. Thank you!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-13472392344389965712011-09-04T20:50:28.558-04:002011-09-04T20:50:28.558-04:00Very good story! Fast-paced but vivid enough to be...Very good story! Fast-paced but vivid enough to be believable. Good work.Evan Henryhttp://cheeseflavoredwind.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-10740637062582654692011-09-02T12:17:01.960-04:002011-09-02T12:17:01.960-04:00Well done, I enjoyed this.Well done, I enjoyed this.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-71236883549905222672011-09-01T17:43:47.310-04:002011-09-01T17:43:47.310-04:00Well done. Truly paints a picture of the horror of...Well done. Truly paints a picture of the horror of war, whatever the 'side'. You showed there is also a human 'side' to war. And most importantly, there must be.Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03275503653927579472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-22159725509434638872011-09-01T11:33:13.074-04:002011-09-01T11:33:13.074-04:00A really believable vignette. Excellent dialogue t...A really believable vignette. Excellent dialogue too. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-86104607457540792282011-08-30T20:32:18.030-04:002011-08-30T20:32:18.030-04:00Great piece of historical fiction. Everything felt...Great piece of historical fiction. Everything felt right. I got chills as the story progressed. Guess I felt that ill wind coming through :)<br /><br />Good work! Visiting from Indie InkCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-27201455847250509862011-08-30T14:54:33.970-04:002011-08-30T14:54:33.970-04:00Wow, that was so much! A great story, vivid descri...Wow, that was so much! A great story, vivid description (the beginning just grabbed me), great dialogue that you can hear, and it twisted from a benign summer's day with so much promise in it to something very dark and fearful at the end. Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-14151102846939794132011-08-30T13:37:52.496-04:002011-08-30T13:37:52.496-04:00Love the pace. I like the dialogue. For the time p...Love the pace. I like the dialogue. For the time period and the subject matter, everything moved. You really did great with the prompt. Congratulations MichaelLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-6258821149943491052011-08-30T10:22:28.468-04:002011-08-30T10:22:28.468-04:00A fast-paced intense tale of woe. Nicely done!A fast-paced intense tale of woe. Nicely done!Karlahttp://www.totthoughts.comnoreply@blogger.com