tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post8609826415311353391..comments2024-02-17T03:35:22.796-05:00Comments on Innocents and Accidents, Hints and Allegations: Hysteria (Indie Ink Writing Challenge)8http://www.blogger.com/profile/00897636875216996092noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-60831240327142350132012-01-03T16:24:59.374-05:002012-01-03T16:24:59.374-05:00excellent last paragraph. Those last two sentences...excellent last paragraph. Those last two sentences sybolized the theme and the emotional connection I ahd to this piece.<br /><br />This was really muscular and kind of mean in a good way. I enjoyed itLancehttp://lancemyblogcanbeatupyourblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-56834008121416697622012-01-03T11:54:16.756-05:002012-01-03T11:54:16.756-05:00Oh, man. This one was tough. Nicely written.Oh, man. This one was tough. Nicely written.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-10426074593312121392012-01-03T11:22:38.912-05:002012-01-03T11:22:38.912-05:00yikes. i like how this builds, one line after the ...yikes. i like how this builds, one line after the next, til you see what's happened and get a glimpse of your narrator's preoccupation.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-68890963982994954132012-01-02T13:16:07.424-05:002012-01-02T13:16:07.424-05:00That gave me a little shiver. Very cool and detach...That gave me a little shiver. Very cool and detached.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6014331.post-52978875220110494442012-01-01T19:02:40.840-05:002012-01-01T19:02:40.840-05:00The ending is perfect. It reminds me of a book I&#...The ending is perfect. It reminds me of a book I've been wanting to write.<br /><br />I think that you did a great job with showing us things, instead of just telling.Head Anthttp://headant.comnoreply@blogger.com