Saturday, February 06, 2010

Darkness Visible

Velvet's new 100 word challenge this week is "Darkness".





You can't see it, but it's there. It's doubt. Fear. Loneliness. Anger. It's cynicism. It's snark, and spite, and denial of the rationality of those who oppose you. It's rage, and violence, and destruction. It's separation from light, goodness, trust, hope. You can see it in the path you've chosen, and you can see it reflected in the embryonic psyche of your child. You never wanted them to find it, but they know it now, and they will learn the contours of the insides of the fog soon enough. It's there, and it's growing, and it pulls at your ankles.

5 comments:

Chloe said...

Oh! This is so brilliant!

You terrified me with only 100 words.

PattiKen said...

Very scary!

Titanium said...

That is my ex-husband, in 100 words.

Velvet Verbosity said...

This one was my pick of the week! :) Hop over to my blog to see why.

Michael said...

Thanks, VV. I am flattered.