Friday, June 03, 2011

100 Word Challenge: Assume

Velvet Verbosity's 100 Word Challenge is busy growing its playoff beard. This week's word is "unconscious", and my story about unconscious bias is called "Assume".








Her pregnancy had been a seemingly unending series of bad news, restrictions, and rules. You can't do this anymore, you're not allowed to have that. I was sitting next to her, facing her as she sat. The curtain parted and a tiny woman with tight brown curls and cute glasses came through, holding a chart.

"We've decided we're going to induce you in the morning," she said firmly in a little girl voice.

I had come quickly to my feet. "When did the doctor decide that?," I asked.

"Just now," she said. "I'm the doctor."

5 comments:

  1. Gee, might have been nice to KNOW this was the doctor in charge, hmmm?

    Very frustrating experience. Fingers crossed this pregnancy ends well

    Visiting from 100 words

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  2. Carrie- thank you, but the pregnancy ended 15 years ago. This is a melange of the truth and fiction- we did have a very tiny female physician attending the birth, and it would have been easy to assume she was a nurse. But nothing like this really happened.

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  3. Haha! "unconscious bias", that's a great interpretation of the prompt, as usual!

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  4. You could have been talking about my GP. She looks likes she's about 15, but she's awesome.

    Great take on the prompt.

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