Sunday, September 05, 2010

Tomorrow is Microfiction Monday, But You Get To Read It Today: "Adventure Cruise"

Tomorrow is Microfiction Monday, but you have to read it today.


This one is called "Adventure Cruise"













Johnson went over, then Charles.

Cap tried to save Jenkins, waves took them both.

I really shouldn’t have asked for the “Adventure Cruise”.
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19 comments:

  1. quillySeptember 5, 2010 at 6:43 PM

    Well, at least he got what he paid for! LOL!

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  2. anthonynorthSeptember 5, 2010 at 6:49 PM

    Maybe the hint came with the one way ticket.
    Enjoyed that :-)

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  3. PatSeptember 5, 2010 at 6:51 PM

    Always read the fine print and listen to the local weather forecaster! Good one, Michael.

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  4. DianeSeptember 5, 2010 at 7:00 PM

    Nope!!! Enjoyed your take. :O)

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  5. PeggySeptember 5, 2010 at 7:06 PM

    I enjoyed this very much. Not going to take an adventure cruise anytime soon. :)

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  6. Sylvia KSeptember 5, 2010 at 7:10 PM

    Great one Michael! And we do indeed get what we pay for!

    Sylvia

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2010 at 7:16 PM

    LOL--I hope he paid for the trip using a credit card that gets frozen once he's gone!
    Cheers.

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  8. Fay CampbellSeptember 5, 2010 at 9:42 PM

    Adventures aren't guaranteed to be fun, eh? good one.

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  9. One Prayer GirlSeptember 5, 2010 at 10:29 PM

    I'm still laughing. Nice little piece of micro-fiction.

    My first try at a Micro-Fiction Monday is up.

    PG

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  10. JimSeptember 5, 2010 at 11:02 PM

    Next time they should take the luxury cruise. Huh, Michael? :)
    ..

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  11. humangalSeptember 5, 2010 at 11:39 PM

    Hey, this is life; you get exactly what you ask for.. even if it's not how you expect it.. or would want it to happen LOL

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  12. Ellie GarrattSeptember 6, 2010 at 2:18 AM

    LOL. This made me laugh. To think he probably wanted a nice sedate cruise!

    Have a great week x

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  13. EG CameraGirlSeptember 6, 2010 at 7:22 AM

    Hehe! Too much adventure?! :)

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  14. Maude LynnSeptember 6, 2010 at 9:43 AM

    That's a little too much truth in advertising!

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  15. hopeSeptember 6, 2010 at 11:01 AM

    This is EXACTLY why cruises don't interest me. :)

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  16. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 6, 2010 at 3:53 PM

    brilliantly said.
    love your take.

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2010 at 4:35 PM

    Adventure, exactly as advertised. I'd say he's got his money's worth.

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  18. Susan at Stony RiverSeptember 6, 2010 at 7:49 PM

    I had a few 'adventure vacations' but all by accident -- and NEVER a cruise! I hope your narrator ended up safe and dry anyhow ---

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  19. SouthLakesMomSeptember 6, 2010 at 9:28 PM

    They probably fudged the fine print on the meaning of "white water"!

    Well done!

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