This one is called "Adventure Cruise"
Johnson went over, then Charles.
Cap tried to save Jenkins, waves took them both.
I really shouldn’t have asked for the “Adventure Cruise”.
Sunday, September 05, 2010
Tomorrow is Microfiction Monday, But You Get To Read It Today: "Adventure Cruise"
This one is called "Adventure Cruise"
Johnson went over, then Charles.
Cap tried to save Jenkins, waves took them both.
I really shouldn’t have asked for the “Adventure Cruise”.
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Well, at least he got what he paid for! LOL!
Maybe the hint came with the one way ticket.
Enjoyed that :-)
Always read the fine print and listen to the local weather forecaster! Good one, Michael.
Nope!!! Enjoyed your take. :O)
I enjoyed this very much. Not going to take an adventure cruise anytime soon. :)
Great one Michael! And we do indeed get what we pay for!
Sylvia
LOL--I hope he paid for the trip using a credit card that gets frozen once he's gone!
Cheers.
Adventures aren't guaranteed to be fun, eh? good one.
I'm still laughing. Nice little piece of micro-fiction.
My first try at a Micro-Fiction Monday is up.
PG
Next time they should take the luxury cruise. Huh, Michael? :)
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Hey, this is life; you get exactly what you ask for.. even if it's not how you expect it.. or would want it to happen LOL
LOL. This made me laugh. To think he probably wanted a nice sedate cruise!
Have a great week x
Hehe! Too much adventure?! :)
That's a little too much truth in advertising!
This is EXACTLY why cruises don't interest me. :)
brilliantly said.
love your take.
Adventure, exactly as advertised. I'd say he's got his money's worth.
I had a few 'adventure vacations' but all by accident -- and NEVER a cruise! I hope your narrator ended up safe and dry anyhow ---
They probably fudged the fine print on the meaning of "white water"!
Well done!
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