Friday, July 30, 2010

He Knows It All...As Long As It's 55 Words Or Less: "Message In A Bottle"

G Man's Friday Flash 55 happens, you guessed it, on Fridays. Write a Story, in 55 Words Or Less.

This week's entry is called "Message In A Bottle".

A missive. A note. A letter.

A plea from the past, delivered in the present.

How to get her to listen?

To read? To understand?  

To accept what I have to say?

To see how very sorry I am?

Why should she?

Back then, I didn’t listen to her. 


  1. a train of thoughts, nicely done!

  2. Pensive, sad, rueful, I like the guy's attitude at the end. I hope she does read, listen, understand...

  3. Michael...
    Just so you know...These need to be EXACTLY 55 words.
    Hence...Friday Flash 55!
    You Did Good Son!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

  4. Is turnabout fair play? Sad 55...hope she will listen but there are no guarantees, I guess.

    Mine is at:

  5. oh yes - not easy at all - but you'll win her back with persistence - and maybe some flowers and a kiss...nice 55 - even if it is no real 55 ;o)


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