G Man's Friday Flash 55 happens, you guessed it, on Fridays. Write a Story, in 55 Words Or Less.
This week's entry is called "Message In A Bottle".
A missive. A note. A letter.
A plea from the past, delivered in the present.
How to get her to listen?
To read? To understand?
To accept what I have to say?
To see how very sorry I am?
Why should she?
Back then, I didn’t listen to her.
a train of thoughts, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteis this your 55?
ReplyDeletePensive, sad, rueful, I like the guy's attitude at the end. I hope she does read, listen, understand...
ReplyDeleteMichael...
ReplyDeleteJust so you know...These need to be EXACTLY 55 words.
Hence...Friday Flash 55!
You Did Good Son!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen
Is turnabout fair play? Sad 55...hope she will listen but there are no guarantees, I guess.
ReplyDeleteMine is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2010/07/motherhood-flash-55-friday-july-30-2010.html#links
oh yes - not easy at all - but you'll win her back with persistence - and maybe some flowers and a kiss...nice 55 - even if it is no real 55 ;o)
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